Lord

Show me steps

        to Heaven's Gate

give me strength to climb

withstand forces of evil

 

Fill my soul with love

        suffocate my hate

teach me to love

        my enemies

forgive them as you have

 

Show me steps

        to Heaven's Gate

Lord; help me climb

        My soul weak

My spirit broken

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Third Place, Touched My Inner Spirit

Your poem toched my inner spirit and is well deserving of Third Place


How many people have aswked God to guide their path. I know I have and do almost every single day.

Very well written and a lovely piece


I loved this part!


Fill my soul with love

suffocate my hate

teach me to love

my enemies

forgive them as you have



Nancy Lee Shrader
Author
IS IT NOW? The End of Days!
IS HE MESSIAH? Messianic Prophecies Revealed!
The Curse of Mayweather House
www.freewebs.com/booksbynancyleeshrader

[Laura E. Aranda]

I LOVE THIS WRITE!
God luck in the contest!
One misspelling you might want to adjust:
give me strenth to climb
STRENGTH

Cheers,lea