Cruel Dream

Cruel Dream

A Poem by Tony Hwilka

Please, don't let me wake up

let my dream continue

Now where was -- Oh! Right --

You were on top,leaning forward

breasts just above my lips

n*****s hard and luminous

My tongue licking my lips

similar to a dog with glazed eyes

staring at a sizzling steak

ready for eating

No! No don't let me wake

please don't let me --

       S**T!!!!

© 2008 Tony Hwilka


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Tony Hwilka
A dream you want to stay in.

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lol..! This is funny Tony.. dang dreams... !

Funny how when we have bad dreams, it's a chore to wake up, but when we have good dreams (i'm assuming you found this to be a "good" dream.. lol), then we can't seem to stay asleep.

Maybe next time dear! lol

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very cruel indeed. I noticed the line where "staring a sizzling steak" needs to have "at" inserted there, otherwise a good read and very humorous. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh dear......what a cruel dream....just when it was getting interesting eh? Too bad!!
Nevermind, you can go to sleep again and "perhance to dream" again another night!

~ Helena ~ :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tony Hwilka
Tony Hwilka

Willingboro, NJ



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In the land of poetry I've been very luckly. I have had my own poetry show on radio station WTTM Trenton N.J. reading my poetry from 1982 -- 1990. Was president of the Southern Poets of N.J. and still.. more..

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