Thoughts In A Warm Room

Oh the mystery in the mind of a woman.

She looked deep into his eyes

wondering why she loved him

it was not shape or personaity alone.

His tongue was sharp at times

and as he touched her magic parts

wondering -- vanished

Author's Note

comments welcome

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Good short poem. Just one small correction needed:

her magie parts

You mean "magic," right?

Sal

[Nely Amorim]

womens thoughts are definately a mystery..lol sometimes even to ourselves. I like this piece and enjoy the simple format in which you express so much.