It's Over

When you have to remember - when

         it's over

I love you so much

will let you leave - if

that is what it takes

to make you happy

                   everafter

after

I will remember - when

Author's Note

comments welcome

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

There's a world revealed in that short poem. Very well written and succinct too.

Sal

[Pointblank]

Oh this made me cry. Sometimes you ask God a question and he sends the answers in the most obvious of ways. It's to bad life is not that simple when you have children.

I think there should be an "it" between what and takes.
Thank You for sharing.