Woman

Lord God created man

on the sixth day

from slime of the earth

named him Adam

 

From him, God created woman

to serve -- make him happy

man should never want --

 

Come to pass

Adam said to Eve

    WOMAN !!

help me help you

 

Tell me your needs

your desires

and STOP

about this equal thing

Just say I do

Author's Note

kidding

Reviews

[renea hanna.]

lol. i would have to agree with mary ann. your saving grace was your author's note. cute. as for the discussion on men ever listening to what women want: i think the problem is not only that men don't listen, but as you said, the younger the woman, the less she knows what she really wants, let alone who she really is. more often than not you do have the sad instance of a young woman trying to fit herself into a mold of what she thinks a man wants as opposed to accepting that she must be loved for what she really is, not pretends to be. funny, the actions that are motivated by every person's desire to be loved. enjoyed this line of thought.

[Tony Hwilka]

In my opinion when young, NO. Because women try molding them to their perfect man. And when that phase is over most men will start because they realize you love them for what they are and not what you tried to change them to. A man must feel he is loved as much as he loves her and everything else is second even the kids. Yes he will listen then, because his sole goal in life is to make his lover,wife, HAPPY. So says Tony Hwilka.

[Leo Gems]

Yeah.. your saving grace was your author's note. Otherwise this review might have taken quite a different tone... LOL.. Although, I have often wondered.. Man will always ask woman to tell... but does he truly listen???