Who Is He ?
A Poem by Tony Hwilka
He who is
could never be
he who was
would never see -- he
who's never been a
ghost to me.
© 2008 Tony Hwilka
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As brief and lovely as this is, the last section is not quite in line with the rest. You've almost reached perfection. I see amazing possibilities here.
He who is
could never be
he who was
would never see --
he who's never
a ghost to me.
And that's not it either. It will find its way.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Emily, Do you know who he is?
Posted 16 Years Ago
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As brief and lovely as this is, the last section is not quite in line with the rest. You've almost reached perfection. I see amazing possibilities here.
He who is
could never be
he who was
would never see --
he who's never
a ghost to me.
And that's not it either. It will find its way.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 21, 2008
Last Updated on July 26, 2008
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Tony HwilkaWillingboro, NJ
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In the land of poetry I've been very luckly. I have had my own poetry show on radio station WTTM Trenton N.J. reading my poetry from 1982 -- 1990. Was president of the Southern Poets of N.J. and still.. more..
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