He Loves me

He Loves Me

The light blue petals

stain my fingertips as I

whisper 

"he loves me"

although I know he does 

not.

Forget-me-not petals

die at my feet 

collecting in a 

morgue

of blue death as i 

whisper 

"he loves me"

although I know he does 

not.

But love is not child's play.

Because a broken heart is

serious

it has even ended

lives

when you realize that 

"he loves me"

NOT.

- k.n.k 

Reviews

[littlekinglord]

I don't use the words I love you lightly so that is a misconseption about men but I can sew how a lot of them now a days do use it for there own selfish reasons but I really like the the structure of your poem and the way it was protreyed.

[Gee]

He loves me, he loves me not.....usually not. ( I love you )Just a three word code for some men to get a woman's kit off. Ashamedly I know

[Srishti Agrawal]

Suprb lines...touching one...

[Kasey Nichole]

thank you!!

[Coyote Poetry]

When the love die. Part of us die too. A sad and powerful poem dear Kasey. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lizardo]

Because a broken heart is
serious
it has even ended
lives
You made a great poem here, it really seems to come out of the heart.
What a poem, my favorite lines where the one that I put up there, a broken heart is really something we can't explain, make us go in a bad state too...
Well thought out poem.

[Willard Wells]

Very well done and I loved it. Great feeling and thought delivery. I looking forward to reading more of your wok.