Nonsense in Allegory

If you seek through the eyes

of a believer

you will find the horizon somewhere

that a pessimistic won't

If you seek through the eyes 

of a golden retriever 

you will find that love can be found

anywhere

If you weep through the eyes 

of a confused man

you will see images of his former life

and his despair is surely a scare

If you compete through the eyes

of a perfectionist

you will weep when you seek to 

compete.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Deep, expressive piece. You have a stunning maturity to your work, I think.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

deep dwelling inner snapshots of beyond the vision field~ thoughtfully built poetic~

[Jazique]

Wow that was something. To do the things of others or look through eyes and know their past and what they felt that was something. It'd be a lie if I had a favorite because I really enjoyed it all. I really loved the concept all in all so well done and can't wait to read more of your writings.

[Dayran]

Wise words that speak of the many perceptions that we often store as one. Nice!

[Larry Dyson]

I would substitute .".you will weep when you seek competition."..just feel it completes your write.. excellent.. or whatever..

[Tainted Devotion]

Liked the idea a lot. Continue with it and see where it goes. Very interesting. :)

[Hannah Paige]

i like the concept, it's really interesting. it feels sort of incomplete