Anger, Grief, Strong, Vulnerable, Gone.

Basically anger, grief, strong, vulnerable, gone is the steps that I go through during break ups or letting go of a situation/friend. I hope you like the poem. :)

Images of your eyes

flash to cannibalistic vultures

feeding on the heart of their

prey.

They prey on the weak

and the broken

and sometimes even

the miserable.

You never wanted to hurt me,

but yet you continue

to be in my presence

you can hear my heart

scream,

the blood pouring like

the tears that shoot

out of my eyes.

Replicas are hard to come by,

but life has a way

of surprising 

you

you might want to

think twice

before you cross someone

who knows karate.

The world has never seemed

so big

and the people have never 

seemed so

mean

but cuts heal

and mistakes overlap with

other ones.

You once gave me a 

heartache

and now you left me

with a 

headache.

Author's Note

If you haven't noticed, the stanzas are broken into the 5 stages of "getting over a break up". Just thought that would be cool for you to know.

Reviews

[Everson Taveras]

Delectable read!

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Indeed I noticed that. Very good s**t my friend.