Hold me, Thrill me, Kiss me, Kill me.

The ribbon of deceased departure,

the black silk road

that gives us a clip of the future

but the future holds nothing 

only stone cold silence

and distant glares of grudges

there was never a day

where the presence of memories

trail through my mind

like a robber trying to cover its tracks.

Why are you on your knees? Stop being foolish!

there is nothing more unattractive

than a man wanting something

that was never even there

in the first place.

People, especially men, will screw you over

and you can be manipulated

or even be contemplated

and your perception

will be reversed into

self-deception

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Ha Ha this is brilliant. Love it..xx

[Joe Shetina]

Ah, very, very good. Perfect image to a perfect write.

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great picture..I think your stirring a hornets nest with your last stanza..I think woman are just as capable of screwing you over..nice write

[Ripple of Aqua]

Very depictive. A little short and it leaves you with a bitter taste on your tounge. Vivid.

[Lily Mae]

The picture and read made me feel like I was reading a poem on 007.. Very intense meaning in each and every word.. I think as human beings we all have the ability do be in this place...it's all about choice. So wonderful job you made us all think ;) xx

[Becky C Strukamp]

I definitely agree with Kenneth and Brad. An excellent poem.

[Alysa]

I don't think I've read anything like this. Although I can relate. Beautiful piece of work as always, Cassidy. (:

[Kenneth The Poet]

I agree with Brad, it goes both ways. Stunning piece of art.

[Brad]

sad to learn this early...but the truth of this holds for both genders...trust me on that

[Dayran]

I recall a poet here saying in a review (to effect) ' its amazing how someone your age can perceive something so incredibly complex.' I share that perception about this poem. The complexities of handling the concept of a void and its relation to living, is a puzzle that continues boggle the best of thinkers. You have that gift for the profound.