Hold me, Thrill me, Kiss me, Kill me.

The ribbon of deceased departure,

the black silk road

that gives us a clip of the future

but the future holds nothing 

only stone cold silence

and distant glares of grudges

there was never a day

where the presence of memories

trail through my mind

like a robber trying to cover its tracks.

Why are you on your knees? Stop being foolish!

there is nothing more unattractive

than a man wanting something

that was never even there

in the first place.

People, especially men, will screw you over

and you can be manipulated

or even be contemplated

and your perception

will be reversed into

self-deception

Reviews

[rae52]

chilling

[ToxicMelody]

I can definitely relate. This is extraordinary, chilling to the bone if I may say so.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Strong... powerful... deep. I love the picture too.

[Darksummerswind]

Great poem, probably one of your best that I've read.
Like the style you used and the picture definitely caught my attention. Send me more please!

[Daytonight]

A strong write. Keep on penning.

[Kat Collins]

Oh, I love it! And the picture! Quite mature for someone of your age. I'm impressed. It has a haughty, sneering woman at the weakness of men quality.

[trainwreck]

The last stanza was the most powerful. The pacing of this work is a little hard to grasp at first, but it is still quite well-written.

[Garry E. Lewis]

I liked it very thought provoking and intense!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice poem viewing with a different Angle, thanks for sharing...

[amdc101]

This is so amazing and beautiful!!! It is going in my library. I love it!