School

My representation of the first day of school...xD Watch as my imagination takes off! :D

Trudging through the swamp,

getting through to the doors of the dungeon,

the monstrous glares from everyone...

and everything.

Looking through the cavernous windows,

of education death roe,

there is no light in the darkness,

just more monsters hovering over me.

The doors swing open,

the hinges creaking in protest,

telling me to get out while I still can,

but I keep walking,

getting to the dungeon of English,

where the master awaits my presence.

Self-indulged thinking inferior masters,

fill the dungeons with their intelligence,

making the clock tick slower,

and slower,

and slower.

Tomorrow is the same,

the same walk of shame,

the same feeling of esteem drainage,

give me some light to drain out my,

monstrous headache.

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome work. Very original and clever..xx

[Shep]

Hey I love monsters they are so cute when they get angry except by that time I am long gone. Love the poem and the spooky vibe it had. Nicely done.

[Lily Mae]

I went to a small Catholic School.. you've penned my experiences there very well lol,.xx

[Dayran]

Its just the beginning, preparing you for the social unversity out there.

[halflives]

Very imaginative indeed. Well done!

[DontBlink158]

Totally what i went through at school.... hope this year is better..
This was a great poem and i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Excellent poem.

[Jane Doe]

Awesome!!!!!!:)
Lol loved it


Xoxoxo
~abbie100/100

[Rae]

Woah. I can't believe that me and you both wrote about school and posted it at the same time! Great piece, keep writing!!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Don't worry. The one behind the desk, aka Me, have the same fears you do.