The Luck of the Return (Sad Savior)

Before you,

there was anger,

there was anguish,

and there was danger,

there was baneful arguments,

and sardonic hate,

all I wanted to do was escape.

Abstruse thoughts,

phantasmal environment,

there was a dark hole

where my heart should be,

acerbic blood running through

my veins,

and my delirium mindset

drove me mad.

The white horse running along the

amethyst horizon,

making me realize how unique this night was,

and all the malevolent thoughts

washed away, 

your paramount eyes

made my heart escape its cadaver.

My cavernous eyes

turned into scintillating orbs of

impeccable halcyon,

because of the way you looked at me.

You saved me,

from myself,

I guess everyone needs a hero sometimes,

to realize that they are worth 

saving. 

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Yes we all need a hero. Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Great description made the poem come alive. All of us need to be saved. Easy to fall to bad desires. I like the positive ending to the poem.
"The white horse running along the
amethyst horizon,
making me realize how unique this night was,
and all the malevolent thoughts
washed away,
your paramount eyes
made my heart escape its cadaver."
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Joe Shetina]

"You saved me,
from myself,
I guess everyone needs a hero sometimes,
to realize that they are worth
saving."

Greatness.

[Everson Taveras]

This is a very dark piece. Daunting, even, but that is exactly why I like it. Especially the conclusion. good job.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Wow, love the imagery, you wrote this so nice with a great picture with feeling. I love the third stanza.

[joshua deathdealer]

Defiantly one of my favorites from you. Well done..xx

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice appreciation of glorious guideline, follow the path paved with love, nicely written poem..........,

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Yes they do.........wonderfully penned!

[nostal]

LOL Was this an exercise in using all of your vocab list words

[DreyaArt]

agreed, thanks for writing!