The boy without a heart

This all just came pouring out, and I'm not sure if it has a correct meaning. So, interpret it as you wish. No inspiration needed for this poem.

The debauched soul of,

his past inamorata,

leaves him searching,

for something paramount,

even if the feeling, 

is scarce.

Looking past the bright horizon, 

he sees the haunting face, 

of a young girl, 

the winsome way, 

she sweeps him off of his feet,

he is left wondering,

left empty,

left with ambivalence.

And then there is that feeling, 

of capaciousness,

in his heart,

that she used to fill,

so superfluous, 

she capitulates him under her spell of, 

self-indulgence, 

and hedonism.

Now he knows,

never trust a girl with, 

lummox tendencies,

to handle his heart.

Reviews

[Muse]

This is a great read.........my only complaint, perhaps it ended too abruptly? :)

[Jane Doe]

Lol yay new words:)
But its dark and fierce yet seriously meaningful
I like it! A LOT!!!!
:)
thanks forthe read and updated vocabulary
Xoxoxo
~abbie
100/100

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with wisdom and amazing language. The poem was so good I had to read a few times.
"she capitulates him under her spell of,
self-indulgence,
and hedonism."
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Angel Bluestocking]

for me, its dark. but i love the message. and i have new words that i learned! hehe~
its truly an interesting piece. wonderful.

[Dayran]

A woman's greatest ambition is to love - Cicero

[Vinod Kumar U K]

A Well written piece of wide range background of cool landscape, add the cool atmosphere for easy digest, nice job....

[Joe Shetina]

Haunting, but some of the words are a bit florid for this poem. The word "cherubic" sort of took me out of the poem for a moment. That might just be me, though.

[NightShade]

I'm sure many will read themselves into this curious bit of literature. I am fascinated by the choice of words throughout. Then again, the structure of a few sentences has me a bit off balance. Which, I suppose, is at least partially the point. I like it when you experiment.

[DreyaArt]

interesting