The boy without a heart

This all just came pouring out, and I'm not sure if it has a correct meaning. So, interpret it as you wish. No inspiration needed for this poem.

The debauched soul of,

his past inamorata,

leaves him searching,

for something paramount,

even if the feeling, 

is scarce.

Looking past the bright horizon, 

he sees the haunting face, 

of a young girl, 

the winsome way, 

she sweeps him off of his feet,

he is left wondering,

left empty,

left with ambivalence.

And then there is that feeling, 

of capaciousness,

in his heart,

that she used to fill,

so superfluous, 

she capitulates him under her spell of, 

self-indulgence, 

and hedonism.

Now he knows,

never trust a girl with, 

lummox tendencies,

to handle his heart.

Reviews

[WindSong]

A belief that pleasure and happiness is the highest good! Not bad! Great write! I like the mix of small, medium and large words! Interesting! Makes one think!

WindSong

[Alysa]

Ah! LOVEEEEE!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Never trust the clumsy to handle your heart, the most tender part of you......wonderful!

[Megan]

oh wow this is beautiful...so deep!! I love your vocabulary and the way you describe this boy :) it sounds like you really care for him and know his inner most feelings! I really loved reading this too, it was touching.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Well written. The last stanza is perfect.

[Jvl narasimharao]

Your sympathies are with the poor boy.A nice poem

[amdc101]

This is beautiful and intense. Great vocabulary.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Intense. The last stanza is perfect.