The boy without a heart

This all just came pouring out, and I'm not sure if it has a correct meaning. So, interpret it as you wish. No inspiration needed for this poem.

The debauched soul of,

his past inamorata,

leaves him searching,

for something paramount,

even if the feeling, 

is scarce.

Looking past the bright horizon, 

he sees the haunting face, 

of a young girl, 

the winsome way, 

she sweeps him off of his feet,

he is left wondering,

left empty,

left with ambivalence.

And then there is that feeling, 

of capaciousness,

in his heart,

that she used to fill,

so superfluous, 

she capitulates him under her spell of, 

self-indulgence, 

and hedonism.

Now he knows,

never trust a girl with, 

lummox tendencies,

to handle his heart.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write and vocabulary.

[Daytonight]

Great work. Fabulous vocabulary. Keep on penning.

[OtherWorldWoman]

It is well-written and well-worded. I enjoy the way that you brought all of the pieces together.

[Everson Taveras]

An empty vessel in search of love, but cannot trust it. Very good.

[Deanna Ballard]

Reminds me of JoJo's "The Boy Without a Heart".

[Darksummerswind]

This is a poem that captures a person's thoughts.

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful write...nice wordage..xx

[Calypso]

One time I said "I'm glad I'm not lesbian, because I could never deal with a woman's drama."
At least that's what it made me think of.
Great poem/story.

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this is really well constructed, great flow and imagery..and you have a nack of giving a solid ending..

[DontBlink158]

i loved all the large words through out it!!! Great job!!