PART 1: Fire's Prophecy

Main character (soul #1): Pandora Lancaster

Basic outline of part 1: 

Pandora is apart of another world called Cypryas where their humanity is different than the Earth: 

    - Ceremony of Mating, where each woman is supplied with a man, in which she has to bare his children. 

    - Evil is all around them. And there is nobody to stop it. The only thing that the people of Cypryas can do is shun them. 

    - There are a selected few that have a element. There can only be up to 4 or 5 people in each generation that has such powers.

    - They eat plants and animals. Of course, they don't have packaged meat. They have to hunt their own.

Pandora is faced with a difficult decision of going against the law, or following her heart. There is a man that she hates, a man that she can't live without, and a man who she loves. But both of those situation ends in fatality, I guess fate isn't in the cards for her. 

But there is a secret that she is oblivious to knowing, a secret that can change the way people initially made this world. A secret that bonds Pandora and Kathryn (soul #2) in a way science is unable to do.

Leave your comments/reviews below if you want to know a little bit more about Cypryas, Pandora or anything else. 

Pandora: 

Reviews

[PyroKitty24]

I think it sounds interesting, but the way you wrote the summary it seems like it is a little confusing. When you just put the bullet-ed points in the beginning, I was a bit on the lost side. I think it would have been easy to follow if it was all in paragraph form. Summaries shouldn't be long, but don't think they have to be unnaturally short. As long as there's enough information so that everything ties together and makes sense. On a good note, I liked the adding of a picture.

[DontBlink158]

Sounds really cool, i am gonna keep reading.

[NightShade]

Definitely is an interesting concept.

[WindSong]

It kept my attention, therefore, I kept reading...until the next chapter!

WindSong

[Joe Shetina]

I'll be reading.

[rae52]

can't wait for more

[Becky C Strukamp]

Good story line. Love the picture. Look forward to more.

[amdc101]

This sounds interesting. I would read it.

[Darksummerswind]

I think that this will be an interesting story. Like the picture too.

[Alysa]

I think I'll enjoy this one, as always. I want to steal that picture so I can draw it :D