A lover's nostalgia

With every touch its different, scintillating gleams

impeccable description and encouraging words, 

sardonic whispers surround our bodies, 

but we just whisper haphazardly back.

With each kiss you give me, the invigorating feeling,

invades the evil fiend inside of me, 

and turns it to halcyon cadaver in the dead of the night.

Your kiss sends me deeper into the feeling of besot, 

the phantasmal atmosphere turns into perilous pleasure of happiness,

and the scent of true love will be reminiscent of you.

Cavernous eyes engulfs the beauty of this hour, 

the taciturn sounds of our love consumes the zephyr weather,

my heart is entombed under your beauty and elegance.

The cacophony whispers of our souls as they mend as one,

makes me fall deeper and deeper into the cave of love.

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I love your choice of words and I think a little depth never hurt anybody. This write is very romantic and sweet..Well done..xx

[tynamite]

I love this poem. I love how the big words don't sound forced and fit naturally with the other words.

[~Juliette~]

My thoughts: maybe you should use smaller words so people like me with limited vocabulary can understand what you are trying to say :P
Im sure i would love it if i could understand what you're trying to say. :D
Im teasing. I love ya :)
~Juliette

[Lily Mae]

The cave of love.. I like that... This is an awesome write..xx

[NightShade]

I think that I just had something akin to a psychic orgasm... Well written and filled with wondrous imagery. You engaged the senses, both physical and not. Fabulous work. Yeah... Fantastic on all levels.

[ToxicMelody]

Oh yes! I like this one. I actually like it a lot. A LOT! My inner romantic is crying for more!

[Dayran]

A name change so frequent that it is likely to be anonymous and shall stay that way. Excellent write!

[WindSong]

So beautiful! Your poem sings of romance in its descriptive wording and masterful imagery in its presentation. The last line is so profound, "makes me fall deeper and deeper in the cave of love". Great writing!

WindSong

[Marie Harrison]

Your kiss is sends me deeper into the feeling of besot,
the phantasmal atmosphere turns into perilous pleasure of happiness,
and the scent of true love will be a reminiscent of you.

Elegant poem
Hope to read more of your poetry.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sweet.