A lover's nostalgia

With every touch its different, scintillating gleams

impeccable description and encouraging words, 

sardonic whispers surround our bodies, 

but we just whisper haphazardly back.

With each kiss you give me, the invigorating feeling,

invades the evil fiend inside of me, 

and turns it to halcyon cadaver in the dead of the night.

Your kiss sends me deeper into the feeling of besot, 

the phantasmal atmosphere turns into perilous pleasure of happiness,

and the scent of true love will be reminiscent of you.

Cavernous eyes engulfs the beauty of this hour, 

the taciturn sounds of our love consumes the zephyr weather,

my heart is entombed under your beauty and elegance.

The cacophony whispers of our souls as they mend as one,

makes me fall deeper and deeper into the cave of love.

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Well done. Thanks for sharing with me. Keep on penning.

[Poetic Beauty]

Some times love can feel like a cave or a prison if it isn't with the right person. doesn't mean that you don't love that person, it simply means that the personalities clash or there are differences in opinion that make it hard to be with that person even though you deeply care about them. that is what this poem says to me.

[rae52]

its amazing

[DontBlink158]

"Makes me fall deeper and deeper into the cave of love." i LOVE this line. in fact i love the whole poem. I think you did a wonderful job!!!

[Deanna Ballard]

VERY good use of your vocabulary. Most people forget that there are words besides the obvious that will empower one's work much more than you typical blues and reds or loud and quiet for examples. The strong use of your words is what really made this poem stand out to me. Very good write.

[Larry Dyson]

like this allagory"With each kiss you give me, the invigorating feeling,

invades the evil fiend inside of me,

and turns it to halcyon cadaver in the dead of the night.

Your kiss sends me deeper into the feeling of besot,

the phantasmal atmosphere turns into perilous pleasure of happiness,

and the scent of true love will be reminiscent of you."

[PyroKitty24]

Again, I really don't know much about poetry, but you have an interesting way to how you write it. Even though, I believe the point of poetry is to be able to invoke the senses of the reader, and it is hard to do with words that most people would have to look up.

[Jazique]

Your descriptions, your words, were all so powerful. I mean you have a great vocabulary and how the words went together wonderfully; makes me wish I can do this. Really all I can say is wow because the best can leave you speechless.

[Dreamer]

hmmm what a wonderful write. Impressive vocabulary. Great job

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very creative love poem. There is beauty and darkness here. Love can create both within us, I think.