Kyero - Welcome to the family

I imagine Kyero looking as Alex Pettyfer! Hahaha.

Unholy Confessions

Welcome to a world where your deepest fears and dreams come true.

You be the judge about who is sane, and who is on the brink of destruction.

Let your imagination ponder your intuition and bravery.

But let this be said. There are 3 people and 3 games.

Who will survive, who will go mad, and who won’t come out at all?

C.C Hiebert

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  "Kyero, open this damn door! If you don't I swear I'll break it down and carry you out myself."

I can see you're a king who's been dethroned. Cast out in a world you've never known.

Kyero's favorite song by Avenged Sevenfold was blasting through the small speakers in his bedroom while he got ready for the first day of school. He dreaded throughout the night about today, and wished that there was somehow he could freeze time. 

"Kyero, you have 5 minutes! I'll be in the car waiting, and if you're not in there by then, I'll get your sister to drive you to school. And you know what a hassle she is on the road!" 

Deep inside where nothings fine, I've lost my mind. You're not invited, so step aside.

Its not that Kyero didn't hear his mother, its that he wished he didn't. His mother was always that over-protective parent that never understood teenagers. She would always wonder why he acted the way he did, but whatever he told her, she never got. She says things exactly as they are put. One thing that Kyero never understood nor liked. 

He quickly put on his plain black shirt and wiped the dog hair off of his denim jeans that were growing a little too short for him. He never liked going out and buying new clothes, there was something about it that he just really despised. Maybe it was because his mom always had to approve of what he bought. 

Running his hand through his short blonde hair that was a shade too light for his appearance, he grabbed his backpack, turned off his stereo and headed out for the car. 

The hallways to his small little house were basically just like anyone else's. There was a couple family photos of the 6 of them- his mom, his dad, his little sister, Kyero, his older sister and older brother. If it wasn't for his dad's high paying job as a Dentist, they probably would of eventually be put in foster care.

Author's Note

A short introduction to Kyero's character and a little bit about his family life. Later on in the chapters of other characters, I'll be describing the story line a little bit more. I hope you guys like it. :) If there's anything that needs to be changed/modified (also if you have any bigger words I could incorporate into this story)- please post them!

Reviews

[Call It A Day]

Interesting! I like it because I can't relate to it yet and that makes me want to read more! Especially the foster care part. I feel like figuring out why they would have been put in foster care is a chapter or two in itself, maybe even more. I have an old friend who I believe you may relate with and this short bit of the story reminds me of him. I'm excited to read more!

[P.M. Lenski]

"Who will survive, who will go mad, and who won’t come out at all?"

This reminds me of Saw,which you were watching like 2 days ago lawl.
But this is reaaaally good and I can't wait to read the rest of ur read requests.
{{Sorry I haven't been on, I'm in Mexicoooo!}}

[w2de35657u687y4324rf]

The parts in italics were the most interesting part for me. I'm not sure if they were song lyrics or something, but if they're not then good job. I did something along the same lines in one of my books. No one really caught on to it, though. Nice write, short, though.

[rae52]

great so far

[Tasha]

Interesting, can't wait to read more.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[TheElfPrincess]

I like that you put in a song of Avanged Sevenfold, it's a great band. I like the chapter itself as well, there are a few mistakes like Its should be it's. Well done, I'm interested.

[miguelbovine]

The way you spit information out is like an ATM putting out 20 dollar bills.True master of story telling

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good description in your words. Create some history and reason for Kyero. It was a short chapter. But you gave a lot of information. A strong ending to a excellent chapter.
Coyote

[sugar]

ooh its sounding good so far:)

[amdc101]

I don't think you need to say 'denim jeans' You could just say jeans. And you don't need small little house. It could be one or the other. Nice opening, and unique name

[Becky C Strukamp]

Great opening, Looking forward to knowing more about Kyero and what happens next.