Kyero - Welcome to the family

I imagine Kyero looking as Alex Pettyfer! Hahaha.

Unholy Confessions

Welcome to a world where your deepest fears and dreams come true.

You be the judge about who is sane, and who is on the brink of destruction.

Let your imagination ponder your intuition and bravery.

But let this be said. There are 3 people and 3 games.

Who will survive, who will go mad, and who won’t come out at all?

C.C Hiebert

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  "Kyero, open this damn door! If you don't I swear I'll break it down and carry you out myself."

I can see you're a king who's been dethroned. Cast out in a world you've never known.

Kyero's favorite song by Avenged Sevenfold was blasting through the small speakers in his bedroom while he got ready for the first day of school. He dreaded throughout the night about today, and wished that there was somehow he could freeze time. 

"Kyero, you have 5 minutes! I'll be in the car waiting, and if you're not in there by then, I'll get your sister to drive you to school. And you know what a hassle she is on the road!" 

Deep inside where nothings fine, I've lost my mind. You're not invited, so step aside.

Its not that Kyero didn't hear his mother, its that he wished he didn't. His mother was always that over-protective parent that never understood teenagers. She would always wonder why he acted the way he did, but whatever he told her, she never got. She says things exactly as they are put. One thing that Kyero never understood nor liked. 

He quickly put on his plain black shirt and wiped the dog hair off of his denim jeans that were growing a little too short for him. He never liked going out and buying new clothes, there was something about it that he just really despised. Maybe it was because his mom always had to approve of what he bought. 

Running his hand through his short blonde hair that was a shade too light for his appearance, he grabbed his backpack, turned off his stereo and headed out for the car. 

The hallways to his small little house were basically just like anyone else's. There was a couple family photos of the 6 of them- his mom, his dad, his little sister, Kyero, his older sister and older brother. If it wasn't for his dad's high paying job as a Dentist, they probably would of eventually be put in foster care.

Author's Note

A short introduction to Kyero's character and a little bit about his family life. Later on in the chapters of other characters, I'll be describing the story line a little bit more. I hope you guys like it. :) If there's anything that needs to be changed/modified (also if you have any bigger words I could incorporate into this story)- please post them!

Reviews

[Call It A Day]

Interesting! I like it because I can't relate to it yet and that makes me want to read more! Especially the foster care part. I feel like figuring out why they would have been put in foster care is a chapter or two in itself, maybe even more. I have an old friend who I believe you may relate with and this short bit of the story reminds me of him. I'm excited to read more!

[tynamite]

This introduction is good, but it's a very short introduction so I'll have to read more to see if I like the book. Everything sounds completely normal and fine - for now.

[Daytonight]

I really liked this story and I am totally intrigued by the blurb under the title. Well done!

[nostal]

nice effective use of the quote at start

[Calypso]

I like how developed Kyero's character is (btw love the name!).

[Alskar]

I thought the AS lyrics were really cool inner workings of Kyero's mind. Then, I discover they are in fact Avenged lyrics xD This chapter is basic, all we know so far about Kyero is that he likes Avenged Sevenfold and thinks his hair is too light. I'm glad you didn't make him an overly gorgeous perfect specimen of the male gender, like you see so often in these types of writes. There is nothing here for me to grip onto, though, there needs to be something far more exciting in here to keep the readers' interest.

[brenda]

i feel the same for kyero !:)

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Very Nice story telling long storeyed stories......

[DontBlink158]

good introduction, to the character, cant wait to read more!!!

[AndyJCash]

I can tell someone likes their Avenged Sevenfold haha! (and why the hell wouldn't you?) It's a nice start...I just feel this shouldn't be the end of your introduction. Reading on I see you don't come back to Kyero until the 4th chapter, though saying this the 2nd and 3rd chapters are short enough so you don't forget what you're told about Kyero.
Just my opinion of course, evidently people before me have liked the short intro :P

[Jupiter Jazz]

Interesting, but I have to read more before I really have an opinion


Last sentence, last line, "would of" should be "would've" or "would have"
3rd line, 2nd sentence, "...and wished that there was somehow he could freeze time."