Terrible things

Short and sweet. Getting my feelings down.

a pure heart like yours will falter

until there's nothing left but a drop of blood

the sweet innocence you hide behind

will soon die, and your ugliness will emerge

Reviews

[miguelbovine]

That has to be the greatest poem I have read this year...I bow down to you,you are a true master of thought and words

[Legacy]

Pessimistic Insanity,

Does anyone really know the true depth of the words you speak? I am familiar with these feelings - this knowledge... yet I am unsure that I fully comprehend.

Terrible things happen...

In such short verse, you describe lines we cross and lives we betray. Your words - written in such a powerful tone, outstanding definitely worth two minutes of read as well as a lifetime of pondering.

Great job,

Legacy

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Real terrible thing

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

one of our biggest fears for our children. Penned well.