Loving a torturous soul

killers kill, criers cry, and lovers love

the wounds that you try so desperately hard to hide,

just become aware with just a slip of your shirt 

i knew you were gone before you said you couldn't confide

i'm never allowed to feel the things that you do

because then of course, you wouldn't be you 

i'm never allowed to see the things that you do

because then, of course, i wouldn't be the same

just for awhile, can you lay here with me?

i want to feel your nights embrace

just for awhile, can you lay here with me?

i want to feel your legs entwined with mine

just for awhile, can you lay here with me?

i want to taste your liveliness with my mouth 

one would think an individual could only take so much

but until i met you, i knew everything would eventually change

so just lay here with me, so i can hold you with one last clutch

so just lay here with me, until you're out of my range

Author's Note

I'm aware of my lack of capitalization. :P

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Solid work, dark and foreboding. Nice work, mademoiselle.

[VelvetRosetta]

Well this is such a very deep piece of writing, Hiding wounds, the need of someone. Longing for peace and in the end...

so just lay here with me, until you're out of my range

As if knowing it would come to an end.

Very nice!

[Lily Mae]

Seriously.. wow.. I love it.

"just for awhile, can you lay here with me?
i want to feel your nights embrace
just for awhile, can you lay here with me?
i want to feel your legs entwined with mine
just for awhile, can you lay here with me?
i want to taste your liveliness with my mouth'"

I love this...x

[Jupiter Jazz]

Nice. An expressive need to be around someone so important. Came across nicely