Mine forever [What A Wonderful Dream]

Mine forever [What A Wonderful Dream]

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A love of mine I shall thank endlessly for the happiness he gave me.

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You and me outside ...
Resting on a old hammock ...
Uptop a low, windy hill ...
Me, resting on top of your chest ...
You, hugging my body close to you ...
Both, sleeping comfortably as the wind lightly swings us ...
As we both slept peacefully, I whispered softly in my sleep:
"You are forever my wonderful"

© 2013 ∠( ᐛ 」∠)_


Author's Note

∠( ᐛ 」∠)_
This is a dream I had when I past out of boredom yesterday....
Yes, I know, you know, we all know this is to small and the ending didn't make much sense, but hey, I was just dreaming.
Thank you GDM for the inspitation and love :)

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Awwwh I really loved this, Roxast. It doesn't matter how long this is and how the ending ended. Dreams are well just dreams. Sometimes they don't happen the way we want and at other times they're way better than reality. I am happy for you that you had a such wonderful and loving dream. I have had maybe one of those lately. It makes sense though, since I'm now single. Your words are vivid and it took me there to where the scene happened to see how happy you two were together. Hammocks are romantic to me, but knowing my luck I would fall out of one of those. Hahaha!

"As we both slept peacefully, I whispered softly in my sleep:
"You are forever my wonderful" ---The best part of the dream to me. So sweet.

Overrall, I must say you done a terrific job and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful! This poem is so sweet! your lucky to have dreams like that ^_^ good luck to you two!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwwh I really loved this, Roxast. It doesn't matter how long this is and how the ending ended. Dreams are well just dreams. Sometimes they don't happen the way we want and at other times they're way better than reality. I am happy for you that you had a such wonderful and loving dream. I have had maybe one of those lately. It makes sense though, since I'm now single. Your words are vivid and it took me there to where the scene happened to see how happy you two were together. Hammocks are romantic to me, but knowing my luck I would fall out of one of those. Hahaha!

"As we both slept peacefully, I whispered softly in my sleep:
"You are forever my wonderful" ---The best part of the dream to me. So sweet.

Overrall, I must say you done a terrific job and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very peaceful and satisfying. I can feel the gently breeze...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was .... *crys* betitful!!! Dolphins even can agree , even though I can't speak dolphin (is working on that jk) you have made me so happy today!!!!!! 1000000000/100!!!! And faved . Amazing job my love!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

∠( ᐛ 」∠)_

11 Years Ago

Lol Thank you~! *^^*
Absolutely gorgeous Jakari.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

∠( ᐛ 」∠)_

11 Years Ago

Thank you Koda! ^^
Emunah June.

11 Years Ago

I dont know if I told you this before, but the last line reminds me of a song...Cinema by Benny Benn.. read more
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11 Years Ago

yup.

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