Mine forever [What A Wonderful Dream]

A love of mine I shall thank endlessly for the happiness he gave me.

You and me outside ...
Resting on a old hammock ...
Uptop a low, windy hill ...
Me, resting on top of your chest ...
You, hugging my body close to you ...
Both, sleeping comfortably as the wind lightly swings us ...
As we both slept peacefully, I whispered softly in my sleep:
"You are forever my wonderful"

Author's Note

This is a dream I had when I past out of boredom yesterday....
Yes, I know, you know, we all know this is to small and the ending didn't make much sense, but hey, I was just dreaming.
Thank you GDM for the inspitation and love :)

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwwh I really loved this, Roxast. It doesn't matter how long this is and how the ending ended. Dreams are well just dreams. Sometimes they don't happen the way we want and at other times they're way better than reality. I am happy for you that you had a such wonderful and loving dream. I have had maybe one of those lately. It makes sense though, since I'm now single. Your words are vivid and it took me there to where the scene happened to see how happy you two were together. Hammocks are romantic to me, but knowing my luck I would fall out of one of those. Hahaha!

"As we both slept peacefully, I whispered softly in my sleep:
"You are forever my wonderful" ---The best part of the dream to me. So sweet.

Overrall, I must say you done a terrific job and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[Rhianne Ney]

Well, thumbs up for the good write here ~!

[MandaBear]

this is very sweet! Great job 100%

[The dark story]

That.s truly touching and truly sweet…the feel of rea and pure love…really a nice poem…keep it up!!!

[Caitlynn Cusick]

nyawwwww... very sweet.... you don't know how many times i'm in the same situation... very cool... ^,..,^

[Dominique]

Hey, dreams are a wish that your heart makes. They open up worlds and thoughts that we all either want or wish we didn't have.

[Lino Rie]

Aww I wish I had dreams like that. Well I wish had dreams period. Like your poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the complete poem. A perfect ending to a outstanding poem.
"You are forever my wonderful"
Thank you.
Coyote

[Imagination-mage]

Aw this was so sweetXD!! i loved it, the cute romance where it isn't too smutty and all about "I can't live without u!". Just innocent and adorable! LOVED IT!!

[***The Lost***]

Dreams are what inspire us to be creative. We all must embrace them, the good and bad for something can be learned through all of them.