I Cried

I Cried

A Poem by hershey's kiss

I cried today.


I cried for you, and for me
And all the things we'll never be
For what we lost, although we tried
We hoped, we prayed, we died inside.
I cried, I cried


I cried for because of them.
I sympathized with them, and then
They didn't take the time to see
What really went on inside of me.
(But it's okay, really)


I cried again when I recalled
You tried to get with a girl at all.
You said you'd wait to be by my side.
It shouldn't surprise me that you lied.
You lied. You lied.

Oh, how I cried.

© 2009 hershey's kiss


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I love the repetition, I love the flow, I love the cheekyness to it, I just....love this. And that's all I can say.

-nicole-was-here-

Posted 14 Years Ago


You're so good at rhyming XD I'm jealous. You put so much emotion into it, and the repetition helped too.Good work~

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow sad i can relate to that though

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow....so emotive! this is great! i hate that you were lied to but don't waste your tears on some jerk who would do that. i love you. keep writing great poems :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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hershey's kiss

Cair Paravel, Narnia



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A Poem by hershey's kiss