Something Worth Chasing

I was reading my old writings, and I wrote this about "One by One" as you can probably tell.

     My heart breaks as I read it.

 

           "He has admirers blocking his way."

 

Look! There's my heart

               crushed,

            shattered,

                               the millions of pieces

                       scattered on the floor.

 

          Because I know it's all too true.

 

It's almost cute

                 how oblivious you are.

 

      Every time it crosses my mind,

                      I sink to my knees

              And cry, "God!

  Isn't there any hope for me!?"

 

          The hot pinpricks

     stroll lazily across my face.

 

                I think of the pretty girls

          he is friends with.

 

                  Most of them like him, I'm sure.

 

But even through all this,

                  I like to think

        that every time you look at me,

 

                            I cross your mind.

 

   And maybe

                            just maybe...

 

               I'm not chasing a lost cause.

Author's Note

writer's words are never finished. copyright tarasov. bwaaahaha! ok whadya think?

Reviews

[tarasov]

AWWWWW! this is so awsome! i love it!:D i love the hot pinpricks idea! hehe