Parachute

Parachute

A Poem by hershey's kiss

              I don't know why I'm freaked out.

     I should have seen it coming.

 

                      In fact, I did see it coming..

 

          but,

                   not like this...

 

 

          I seriously don't know what's gotten into you.

 

                  How could you be so stupid!

                         Why would you be so stupid?

 

          You don't make any sense.

                        I wish you would.

 

             I wish you would wake up,

                        see what you're doing wrong,

                and  f i x i t

 

 

                    I can see it now...

              you're going to get pressured,

                   I know you are

 

   You're going to get into trouble

        And you're going to wish you had listened to me

 

              Please...

                        I can't bear to watch you do this to yourself

 

              Stop.

                           Stop now.

                 Before it's too late.

 

          I want to help you

I'm trying to help you

           All you're doing is digging your grave

      Why can't you see that?

 

                            Wake up !

                   You're falling

                                       I'm trying

                                to be your parachute

 

               You're blowing me off.

 

          Signed,

                     Your good friend... who cares

© 2008 hershey's kiss


Author's Note

hershey's kiss
yea random title x] and this is bothering me SO much. what do you think, too much panic and stress at the end?

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grr. i know what you mean!..i really like the "Your good friend... who cares" part. i think all your emotions were summed up very well here. love it:D


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hershey's kiss

Cair Paravel, Narnia



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A Poem by hershey's kiss