one by one...

one day i was doing the "he loves me, he loves me not" with a flower. it's actually quite fun. i thought of that and i felt like writing something about it. [oh, btw, it turned out that he loved me =} ]

 

 

He loves me.

                         He loves me not.

 

He loves me.

                         He loves me not.

 

He wonders what has become of me.

                         He loves me not.

 

He wonders who I am.

                         He loves me not.

 

He can't help but love me.

                         He loves me not.

 

He is appalled by separation.

                         He loves me not.

 

He loves me.

                         He loves me not.

 

He loves and misses me.

                         He loves me not.

 

He has admirers blocking his way.

                         He loves me not.

 

He loves me still.

                         He loves me not.

Author's Note

well this was pretty... what do you think?

Reviews

[Keeley]

ok, now I think you took my diary too!! I love it! It actually describes my relationship (or lack thereof now) b/n my ex-bf and I!

[-Everchanging-]

Wow. I am in love with this, like no joke.
An awesome addition to a traditional flower ^_^

[Enigma]

This was so sweet. I never knew that such a cue little poem can be formed out of those two lines.
It's flows so well from wrod to word that it kind of started souding like a chat to me...lol
I loved it!!! Well Done!!

[darkgurl]

This is just plain wonderful, like how it just flows down the page, well put together and well written.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the analogy you used here...how utterly fascinating!


Kelly
; )

[Deseret]

its nice, i like the tonality of it, and the rhythm it has