If You'd Kiss Me

If You'd Kiss Me

A Poem by Crowley
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Try this on for size......yep, it fits.

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If You’d Kiss Me

 

Hooked steadfast by the glimmer in your eyes

I stroked your intentions between the legs

Of my well worn jeans, eager to please

 

Taking stock of engaging conversation

Building the pressure of long dormant volcanoes

Wanting things that are not mine to take

 

So take me in and roll me about your mouth

Tongue me into the shape that you desire

If wishing made for fervent hopes

 

You’d kiss me

 

© 2010 Crowley


Author's Note

Crowley
A little less dark....not so angry. Be gentle my friends....I know not of what I speak.

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"I know not of what I speak." - HE'S A WITCH! A witch I tell ya burn him...mwuahahaha :P

How does the old saying go, oh ya, "If you want it, go and get it" - I'm sure the ladies will agree with me that they admire confidence and initiative on the guy's part. So don't wait for her to kiss you, kiss her instead :D

I'm a big fan of short poems. Sweet, concise and to the point, so nice job there.
If I had to pick favorite lines, those would have to be,
"So take me in and roll me about your mouth
Tongue me into the shape that you desire"

Nicely done sir!

btw..."between my legs
Of my well worn jeans" - I'd replace "my legs" with "between the legs of my well worn jeans". Just a suggestion.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Your making smoke rings blowing on that loaded gun....

Posted 6 Years Ago


WOAH... cool...

Posted 14 Years Ago


You speak of dreams...

Posted 14 Years Ago


"I know not of what I speak" hahahaha okay.

Damn straight up write. Love. This!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awesome...this may very well get a girls juices flowing ;-). But really this is great, very sensual very subtle but to the point

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh fooey you know well of what you speak!
A sensual poem .. this verse is great:

So take me in and roll me about your mouth

Tongue me into the shape that you desire

If wishing made for fervent hopes



You’d kiss me

Well now that says it all!

Really a desire for that kiss..


Chloe


Posted 14 Years Ago


A moulding of immense intensity hon!

"Taking stock of engaging conversation
Building the pressure of long dormant volcanoes
Wanting things that are not mine to take".............this is awesome!

Such a waiting process here, the volcanoe is a giant of powerful mystery, but it can be understood!
Awesome love!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this...my favorite of yours so far. You sound like me in
your words;). Some great lines here: I stroked your intentions between the legs

Of my well worn jeans, eager to please
So take me in and roll me about your mouth

Tongue me into the shape that you desire
Those are great lines...and I felt passion in them.
You tease LOL!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Tender heat and beautiful. It definitely has a sensual overtone. Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I doubt that you didn't know what you speak about........ but this was a very sweet and somewhat sexual poem.

"So take me in and roll me about your mouth
Tongue me into the shape that you desire " this was my favorite.

Oh the possibilities- can I light the first match,lol.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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