Write On Love

For Someone Special

Write on Love

 

Don’t let me tell you what to write

On the hill, beneath your sweetheart tree

The night blooming freesias open and close on your command

The wind blows sweet words to flow from your pen….smoothly

 

It’s your heart that flows red, then bright orange, pumping

As it bleeds a picture of what you might become

The breeze, just a kiss of dandelion fuzz

Tickles your lip and lets you know that everything will be alright

 

Don’t let me tell you what to write

On the hill, that overlooks your love and longing

A rolling green field giving way to sometimes azure waters

Lapping at the shore that seems the same, but changes….sweetly

 

It’s your eyes that allow a man to enter your thoughts

And feel the excitement of the day unbridled, senses firing keenly

Wringing hands made for grasping, supporting, stroking

Looking into a soul that supports an emotional payload

 

Don’t let me tell you what to write

On the hill, gazing into the pool where every woman finds her inspiration

Pulling phrases like fishes, slick and shiny, deadpan eyes

Releasing inhibition, believing in the turn of a phrase….softly

 

It’s your words love, deep and crucial….tender

It’s your words love, surpassing expectation

It’s your word love, fire and brimstone….exhilarating

It’s your words love, they mean the world

Author's Note

Sometimes people need a little encouragement and then watch out, they flourish and can't be stopped.

Reviews

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

lets just talk about how absolutely delicious this is!!! pulling phrases like fishes... goddamn that whole stanza is jealousmaking. also, it correlates exactly how i feel about writing. we can only offer criticis. on the form and function of a write, not the why of it

[Doreen]

This is one of my favorites of yours. It's so sweet, inspirational and the visual you've created is sensational. You've formed a perfect write here, my dear friend. I'll be saving to my favorites again. :)

[A.Lee]

This is beautiful. You're absolutely right. Sometimes people just need a little encouragement, that little push and once they flourish they just grow and grow and amaze even you who encouraged them to begin with. Nicely written.

[Seashell]

Don't let me tell you that this is no good...cos I'd be lying.

Thanks
Babs xx

[just rose.]

The first two stanzas of this are bliss, and altogether - just lovely.

[Antonio Valentino]

Very sweet write here my dear friend. You have a big heart Corey and a spirit that is warm and comforting. Keep up the good work my man, this place isn't the same without you.

Glad you're back!
Antonio :)

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I love this poem; particularly, line 4--The wind blows sweet words to flow from your pen. I always wondered where are of those words comes from! I seems like writers have no end of critics; so, encouragement is always a welcome commodity. I, also, like the visual of her reaching into a pool of inspiration and pulling out phrases; beautiful, just beautiful.

[Ruth]

A beautiful devotional poem:)
Some people need nurturing lol
xx

[Ice QueenJen]

oh this has stimulated me in so many ways....... and I did write some of a new story. A story of survival, renewel and hope for better times. Which we all could use at this time..... like your words a renewel of a spirit! Thank you for opening the door!

[c.m.]

Poem is beautiful, the images within it are wonderful. The last stanza is pure gold love. The message written into this is so very uplifting and encouraging. Inspiring overall. I adore this poem, definitely one of my favorites of yours.