Schrodinger's Fib

A fun form that consists of 6 lines with syllables of 1/1/2/3/5/8

Schrodinger’s Fib

Steel
Box
Cat dead
Super sad
Wave function collapse
Bizarro world, hellooooo kitty.

Corey Rowley
Copyright 2022

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hellos, Dear Crowley,
I like to think of a box of what I might find
who knows, maybe it's a loss to gain,
hello, kitty,
love that, I really love the poem and its sentiment,
-----1809 Black Plague December

[emmajoygreen]

A clear jumble of words meant to intrigue, amuse and conclude with disappointed applause or sights of bliss. Perhaps, maybe Who knows. .Fine write, fine thoughts.. please take a hundred lines.

[Lorry]

I bet that Schrodinger and Pavlov were beasties and liked nothing more than a good laugh over what new pet torture they came up with. Wouldn't put it past Schrodinger to torture other defenceless things too, like Pavlovs orphans which didn't get quite as many headlines as the furry defencelesses, but as Joe Rogan once said, you don't know hate until you mess with cat lovers! He had a great bit about looking his hater up and realising that hashtag vegan cat is an actual real thing! Just don't tell them I told you about it!
They probably think hello kitty is some form of sexploitation! 😊
... Don't tell them that either! 😊

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Oh, the joys of quantum mechanics and superposition. To quote Todd Snider, "It's too much to think about, too much to figure out, stuck between hope and doubt, oh, it's too much to think about. And "I don't know what you believe but I do know there's no doubt, I'll need another double shot of some ninety proof. I got too much to think about." from Statistician's Blues

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

soft kitty, warm kitty....purr purr purr

[Ken Simm.]

Short, pithy, I said pithy, witty, whimsical, pyschological, mysterious and only alive when I see it. Excellent.

[D. Mansfield]

short, and sweet, anything kitty, leaves us guessing. Nice poem

[An owl on the moon]

Seems you just keep creating wondrous energies in every lines and syllable, my friend. Now... not sure if I'm alive or dead... but loving every moment.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Heisenberg response: I don't know if I'm happy or sad or how fast I should know.
Winston

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a poem with nine lives...Yes.