Sweater Weather

I love me some sweater season!!!

A bare midriff where her favorite black sweater was bunched

Her belly button a crescent, a sliver of moon, waning, sexy

Soft autumn skin losing the summer bronze and making way for ghosts

Asleep on the couch as I come in from a long day on the road

I sit in the recliner and watch her breathing, natural breasts, no bra

Just the way breasts should look in a sweater, am I disappointing you 

The fact that I spend so much time on the breasts, I can’t help it

Her hair falls loosely between them, the blackest shade, highlighted by lamplight

Her lips are slightly parted, pink lips today and utterly kissable

I think of the taste of that mouth after a glass of red wine and chocolate

Those blue eyes, hidden beneath slightly twitching lids as she slumbers

I was never a match for them, coming undone at the seams with a sideways glance

She stirs

“I didn’t hear you come in.”

“Go back to sleep.”

“Sorry was I snoring?”

“No love, just purring.”

Author's Note

You have to enjoy the moment when you can...

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

Thanks Crowley - I did enjoy it very much! Superb and lovely poetic description with lots of juicy images. I like your final line. Definitely worth coming home to.
Regards,
Alan

[Crowley]

Dang I never saw these two reviews!!! Thanks so much, I really appreciate the kind words and the visit. Hope your New Year is going well!!!

[Amanda Trerotola]

You described sweater weather so well. Enjoy it while it last!

[Crowley]

thanks!!! sorry so late in the reply, I appreciate the review and will enjoy since sweater weather in Phoenix is so fleeting!

[Lorry]

You do have to enjoy the moment when they come up. Women will never understand our fixation, I mean inquisitive thought we give to them.
One of those moments that comes with a free smile.
Love it.

[Crowley]

Thanks for the smile and the read, greatly appreciated!!!

[Fran Marie]

Ahem I think you're the one purring here..you set a beautiful
sensual scene with each detail capturing sweet thoughts of love
Nice work Crowley

[Crowley]

Thanks luv!!!!

[Neville]

Hey man.. you dont just capture moments do you, you capture and fix parts of moments.. that shutter speed of your'es is quicker than a blink.. a magnificent gift you have for this sort of thing, my friend.. comfortable, sexy and.. yeah.. you have to enjoy them moments dont ya just... N

[Crowley]

For sure...thanks man!!!

[Neville]

pleasure's mine..

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful moment you have captured here Crowley. Sensual. I love how you sit and watch her breathing. A man smitten methinks. Something about red wine and chocolate kissess.

Chris

[Crowley]

Oh yeah!!!! Thanks for the read, I really appreciate that you could see it!

[T.S. Sky]

A wonderful way to capture the moment.

[Crowley]

So many moments I would love to capture...life is a wonder. Thanks for the review!

[T.S. Sky]

You're welcome

[John the Baptist]

Life does have its sensual moments, some of which pop up spontaneously. This work describes in elegant terms the sight of a sleeping woman. Quite titillating, but in no way vulgar. Enjoyed it very much.

[Crowley]

Many than!!! I'm glad you could identify, and thanks for the wonderful review!

[lightsong]

is there anything You can't write about? a movingly magnificent piece of magic, the intimate closeness that warms every cell in our being, I was there with You, feeling with You, all so real as if it was me, and the ending, it struck me so deep! if this piece is written for a specific someone, please show her, You will send her to heavens! Your love here is higher as it can be, gentle, profound, sensual and loving... so loving... do I love this!? more than I can tell!

[Crowley]

Thanks Light!!! I am glad you could appreciate the point of view...it was lovely in my head!

[Kelly Scheppers]

You manifest the brilliance of a moment so well. I love this to the moon and back, my friend. To the moon and back!

[Crowley]

Thanks Kelly, I never know exactly how these things sound to other people, only what they sound like in my head an my intention.