The Hollow

Just trying.

What is it about the hollow that draws me
The need to see the lights from the darkness at the edges
Your window burns bright and your silhouette beckons
My hardening heart rolls rather than beats and you hear it, pausing

The night I tried to kill you dear was unnerving
No fear could I find in your eyes, watery and dull
The night I tried to kill you dear was unending
No love could I find in your smile, lonely but full

What is it about the hollow that draws me
That bed was the place where you swore your allegiance to crows
Your mind seared any that would look upon you in lust
Taking bangles and heads, the carrion price too steep, wincing

The night I tried to kill you dear was descending
No desire could I find in your thighs, cold and hard
The night I tried to kill you dear was unbending
No regret could I find in your heart, stony and marred

What is it about the hollow that draws me

Author's Note

Hey party people....

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Digging deep Cee...I love the exuberance in the work...I hear the hollows ....they call me and show me your there...shoveling for treasures and answers. You are Brilliant!

[Crowley]

Thanks Q...not hitting on all cylinders with the writing but trying to right the ship.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

This has dragged me back to the grave today Cee...as morbid as it sounds...I feel you making one last love to a dead woman...seeped into the misery...that you ..yourself killed her...made her something that you now think she not ought be. You ate too hungrily and saved no room for the desserts. Not safe for me...I am over lusty for the pursuits of life and love and where to watch them.

[Crowley]

It draws....and draws....and draws.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I did say all that with the evilest of grins on my wildly seductive angel lips...lol so the halo is a lil crooked today and ate too much Chocolate...(inserts wicked laugh)

[Adam Latham]

I'm absolutely terrible at reviewing other peoples work but I really love this! You've got some great lines in there.

"That bed was the place where you swore your allegiance to crows..." Awesome. I wish my brain would come up with lines like that lol.

[Crowley]

I think this was a wonderful review, and I thank you for stopping in. You can be sure I will return the visit!!!