When You Ask Me to Write

...like that ever happens.

When caught in the right depth of perception

I become not a burden, but breath

Grasping for meaning and validation

From the oceans of whispers that stir my libido

I cross your path unhindered and willing to play

As long as your perspective is one of lasting lust

Waiting for the next turn of my undying phrase

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem reminds me of how I love to interact with a writer I adore in writing, play-acting our lust & mutual attraction, being more turned on by our genuine admiration for words, more than the actuality of bodies physically writhing in the flesh! This is the sweetest kind of play for me & you've captured all the sensations with your usual originality! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Crowley]

Wow, Margie that's a great review and sentiment. A very original look at it and true in every sense. thanks so much for hiking by, I really appreciate it!

[Eve]

I can really relate to this personally. While others paint or play football, I sit at my desk and write, it's the only place that one can truly be themselves no matter what they might even say.

[Crowley]

That is sooo true!!! Thanks for the great review, I appreciate it!!!

[emmajoy]

'I become not a burden, but breath ~ Grasping.. .. '

A poem from one who knows... apparently! Seems your words grow saltier over time, old friend.. a touch oif extra this and that, a wish, a hope, a pause... waiting with banners blazing. You went to town quite gently in these words but yet... flung the red cape about your shoulders and went to.. wherever!

[Crowley]

Lol...maybe a little. Thank you so much for the great review!!!

[emmajoy]

Maybe... we live and learn!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Yes, I can see the poetry starved princesses flinging roses at your feet and swooning in the bask of your glowing prose. I love it.

[Crowley]

Well, a man can dream can't he??? lol....thanks Fabian!!!

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Wow splendid word choice u employed to express yourself . I like this extraordinary poem. Kudos.



Pleez do write your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too pls. I like interactions as a way to exchange thought and greetings.

[Crowley]

Thank you, just saw this, was out of town, will surely review you as well!

[Neville]

Ooh err, now that sounds so very darn masterful, I suspect no one is gonna own up and say nah' that just never happens.... micro obs often make for surprisingly good reading, loadsa denial and projection but hey.. that's libido for ya....Nice one ..................... Neville

[Crowley]

It is probably rare for sure, but the thought is romantic. I like to think I am a romantic, but not nearly as romantic as thee.....lol. Thanks Neville!

[Neville]

you are.. I doubt thee not... no, tis not enough, I double doubt thee not.... N

[sette]

very beautiful and coherent lines... very inspiring too

[Crowley]

Been gone for a bit out of town, sorry for the delay. Thanks you so much Sette...you are always welcome here!!!

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely poetic lines. A pleasure to read and we await more from you Crowley. All good wishes.

Chris

[Crowley]

Thanks Christine!!! I always love hearing from you and even more reading you. I will be by!!!

[An owl on the moon]

I read your words and wish the world was filled with more poetry. Even an aching desire can become beautiful. And here you leave your wishes on the wind, and we hope they return tenfold for you, dear friend.

[Crowley]

As always, pleasure to have you around...Thank you!!!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Im skinless but I promised to never bite....

[Crowley]

lol...not sure what that means exactly...plus biting is ok within certain parameters of pain threshold....

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I'm skinless- raw and in my feelings at the moment. Taking in and letting out a variety of emotional baggage. I promised...all things I do or say are true to my virtuous heart. To never bite ...a hand that feeds your soul...even when at times it feels like you are are the nibbled and the nibbler!

[Crowley]

I like that!!!! a little nibbling never hurts especially when it comes from the right space.