The Great Candy Storm

I hope there were Bottle Caps....

It rained candy for three solid days

In a village where my father was the dentist

At first he cried for the welfare of children’s teeth

But now from the window of our candy cane mansion

We can see the ocean, and the line around the block

Living life grandly, one filling at a time

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

And the damage those golf ball-sized jawbreakers must've done! For three days, the candy fell? Wow, I'll bet Walmart made a killing selling candy tires. (Groan... I know...) Now I've gotten way too silly. The poem is great and makes smile, though I have to cover up my rotten teeth.

[barleygirl]

What a wild imagination! As a candy aficionada with a mouthful of fillings & crowns & root canals, I definitely can relate. I love the way you write about most anything! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Oh Joy-I hope it was raining Twizzlers and Reeses Pieces and Gummy Bears-my favorites! No umbrella needed in your village- just good dental insurance! Hahaha! Your father had a sweet practice (forgive the awful joke!). Your delicious poem made me smile hugely Crowley. Allegorically speaking, teeth will always show through.....Loved this little ditty!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

sweet tarts.....it's all a lil tangy!

[Pete]

clever. it's funny how money changes our "view" of things. thanks for the "sweet" write ... :)

[Crowley]

Oh for sure...just a little whimsy form a writing workshop I took years ago. Thanks!!

[¿]

Where's that candy land!!!!
Though am a chocolate lover more than candies yet a visit to that candy land will be an inevitable view.....what kinds of candy fall happened?! Lol
This nonsense write does makes sense anyway.....thanks for sharing :)

[Crowley]

Lol...it is a bit of nonsense. But I thank you for reading just the same. Hope Your weekend is shaping up to be a good one!!!

[¿]

Well my weekend is done today...yeah bit strange but here it's weekend on Friday! But I wish you a relaxing weekend....Chillax!! :)

[Crowley]

You know I will...

[Onlyme]

OH my god...lol this is a beauty Crowley

[Crowley]

Just saw this...thanks Dee...a bit of guilty write for me, I love to write nonsense every once in a while.