Dont

Dont

A Poem by babygirl hernandez
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this is self-help as to not get ur a*s kicked

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Don't run for your life
There is no use
The memories will find you
And crush you
There is no where to hide
You made the mistake
Now you will pay

 

 

Don't run for your life
There is no use
You cant hurt someone
And expect to get away
You will beg for mercy
All you will hear is a laugh
Your only a piece of trash

 

Dont run for your life
There is no use
You will forget all emotions
All you will feel is pain
And you will go insane
You dont deserve this life
It is now time for you to be gone
 

© 2008 babygirl hernandez


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this started off on fire, it caught my attention, some of the lines i think could have been stronger, but overall it was nice, had a great flow. i like to read raw poetry and this is it. I see the anger here but not ounce of peace. there hs to be a balance to me, but this is good... do a little here and a little there and bam , it will fit into its frame perfect.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was really harsh but in a neat way.
It was edgy. I love the whole automatic dominance over the other person.
Excellent work!

-Elissa :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 30, 2008

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babygirl hernandez
babygirl hernandez

parsons, KS



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