Her Love

Everyday she looks at him

 

They are friends

 

But she wants more

 

When she sees him with other girls

 

She wants to cry

 

She wants his love and kisses

 

He mentioned that he liked her too

 

But he does nothing to show it

 

She walks past his house

 

She wants to go an talk to him

 

Her heart races when their together

 

She gets butterflies when she's around him

 

But she is so comfortable

 

She wants him to hold her

 

She wants to walk with him

 

She is afraid she con never have his love

 

All she wants is him

 

The worst pain in love

 

Is loving someone you cant have

 

This is how she feels

Reviews

[Lind]

The feelings in this poem are just about universal. Most of us have experienced, at one time or another, loving someone we can't have. I liked the way you expressed that. On a nitpicky note, though, you might want to watch for typos. They weren't distracting, but it's just an observation. Overall, I really enjoyed it! Keep writing!