I loved you, You never knew

I loved you, You never knew

A Poem by Sharon
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Girl loving guy, but he doesn't seem to feel it somehow. After a long time, the girl's tired. She gave up, loving him.

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I love you, I love you, you never knew
Been my secret for ages, from one place to another
wandering in a timeless region
 
Been in my head
Your face, it hurts
Thinking was always one-sided
My feelings turned: desperate, excited then weary, tired
At last coldness settles
 
Been on my heart
The weight’s sinking deeper and deeper
I can’t breathe; It feels like a burden
I hesitated
I felt so tormented
Before I flung you off my shoulders
Then, I flung you off my shoulders
 
I loved you, I loved you, you never knew
But well it’s going into the coffin of memories soon
I love you would rest peacefully, not to be awaken
Night ends
I began to breathe freedom
 
The thoughts of I love you are now, silenced
Pain whispered, blurred and muffled
I loved you, I loved you
Hush, no tears

© 2008 Sharon


Author's Note

Sharon
Went with my feelings when I wrote this.
We've all liked someone secretly before.
And I'm sure there were times when you gave up cos u see that nothing comes out of it.

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Sharon
Sharon

Singapore, Singapore



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