Ist Dies Das Ende

Friend said He'd be in that place of time
where His pride could be fed
now there is no light to shine
on His shattered head

Friend lives in a bitter state of mind
for what has passed Him by
a darkened hole He longs to find
just to curl up inside

 

Friend once reflected so white
all the rays of the sun
a winter night has drowned the light
and this is what He's become

Friend has closed his eyes, he's tired
of the fight and He knows
all His pride He keeps inside
yet He just won't let go

 

Is dies das ende?

 

Author's Note

tell me what you think. it feels to me a little unresolved but it just happened and my pen wouldn't go farther.

Reviews

[JRB]

death longing life,
Jan/uisiom

[Pakino]

"Is dies das ende?" Curious as to what that means. It does seem it is kinda unresolved. Kinda left hanging. You are nicely describing the state the person is in, but nothing more.

But perhaps this is how it is, to be left in misery and decay. Who knows some accept their fate as such. :)