DREAM KILLER

A Story by Patrick Gattoc

If he'll be silent forever, what would happen?

He would be in prison in killing those. He would suffer the rest in his life in jail. Poor.

Out of fantasy, murdering a dream wouldn't take you to jail. That's reality.

Those were desperate times, when an empire is to be established. When he, gripped his momentum, of reaching the finest position. The position, which I also craved. That position was the best of them all. The status of it's heir is exceptional. All works to that position. In that level, people are on his hands, advancing them to positivity. That, I craved the most ever since.

I was dismayed. That position, was given to him. Although satisfied, with what was assigned to me.

I thank God after all.

I was in silence, at peace, at solitude. I was striving for excellence with my craft. Then, I aspire higher, I aspire the skyline. That was on my heart. It's optimism.

I was molding my dreams to materialize them. I exerted efforts. I sacrificed all, time and space. But all of these, are worthless, I soon discover, what I sow, was reaped by others. Others who clamor for ultimate power and grace.

This was such a spectacular event. Yet I remained calm.

Seconds became minutes, Minutes become Hours, Hours become Days, Days become Months, Seasons changes. However these struck and happens frequently. This is igniting my emotions. This is such a hurricane, that devastates a person's desire for something. He may not be sensitive, he might discard my cry. He never listens, we all know tha

© 2011 Patrick Gattoc

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The Half-Blood Princes

What the HELL are you talking about?
I'd like to inform you that by trying to write poetically and mysteriously, you have completely dumfounded and confused the audience. A few short paragraphs, and I know two things: someone killed a dream and is in jail for it now, and seems to think that he's some sort of knight.
And you cut off randomly. I'm not just talking about the end (which is sloppy, by the way) but it's incredibly obvious in the opening sentence.
"He would be in prison in killing those. He would suffer the rest in his life in jail. Poor." Killing...those? Those what? Poor what? He's poor as in no money? Well...duh. He's in jail. For some reason.

-Half Blood Princes