My little Brother

My little Brother

A Poem by hemapriya
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The love between me and my younger brother

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I lived alone, played alone,slept alone,lamented alone,cried alone, ate alone, even laughed alone
You came there with thousands of lights
And you made me delight
I still remember when I saw you
My little baby doll
Now , even I may scold you
Beat you
I feel sorry for that
But without you and
You without me is like
A visit to hell
I often think about you
You are the beat of my heart
I really love you
I really melt for you
The intimate between you and me was infinite
I am inevitably there for you in all facets
Till my eternal rest my boy

© 2017 hemapriya


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hemapriya
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Cute....I so wish I had a little brother...
But I guess my elder brothers has the same feeling for me...
Apple of their eye!! I know they'll be the most disappointed at my farewell cause they love me so much beyond the world!!
Thanks for sharing this Priya😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hemapriya

6 Years Ago

Tq tahsin.. for ur wrds keep reading ma poems..I'm excited to read more reviews of u
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6 Years Ago

It'll wholly be my pleasure😊



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The first line is so me. I'm an only child. Friends have grown into being my family and siblings now which is so special to me. Loved reading this little poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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hemapriya

6 Years Ago

Tq giullia...for...it's ma wrk to be more attentive to get more reviews of u😊
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Cute....I so wish I had a little brother...
But I guess my elder brothers has the same feeling for me...
Apple of their eye!! I know they'll be the most disappointed at my farewell cause they love me so much beyond the world!!
Thanks for sharing this Priya😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hemapriya

6 Years Ago

Tq tahsin.. for ur wrds keep reading ma poems..I'm excited to read more reviews of u
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6 Years Ago

It'll wholly be my pleasure😊

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hemapriya
hemapriya

karur, India



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Iam the daughter of selvaraj and bhuvaneswari. 21years old from tamilnadu. more..

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