Writings for my dad

I love my dad ...and I can't express how much I am loving him though I scribbled something what I can

No things I could seen if
-You were not there
No places I could went if
-You were not there
No happening would happened if
-You were not there
Without you everything was blank to me
In this Earth ; I am still living,
still learning, still loving, still smiling,
still rejoicing and everything
because of you
you make me to feel, realise,and calculate
Who I am
And I am still following
The route what you have
-made for me and still
Having the mysterical journey
with your lovely fingers
I won't let anyone to
Divide our fingers and to deviate our dreams
I love you still the death of my soul

Author's Note

Pls convey me the good and bad of my writings if any

Reviews

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U know when I was about 1and a half month I was affected by cold.....my condition was that bad even doctor said no place for hope!
But miraculously I escaped that dreadful night....My father still remember that night and tears comes in his eyes....the sign that how much he's scared of loosing me!
This poem really touched my heart!
Specially the last three lines😊

[Abraham George]

nice tribute to a dad.

Your dad will be proud to have you as his Daughter.

Having the mysterical journey
with your lovely fingers
I won't let anyone to
Divide our fingers and to deviate our dreams
I love you still the death of my soul
in childhood we learn to walk by holding our dad's fingers.

You wrote it magically and well beautifully.
nice job. Keep going ahead my friend

[hemapriya]

Thank u frnd for ur words it actually encourages me thanks a lot

[Abraham George]

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