To my friend

Actually I wanna convey my feelings towards my friend through poem

I am in lonely
You came there and engage me
You said me that
You are likely to me
You gave me the
-zone that I really want
You make me to feel
-the situation in the celestial city
What I really want from you is.......
......You should be with me
Throughout my life

Author's Note

There may be mistakes .... so pls if any u can convey

Reviews

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Start like very sweet poem . Ending with bitter hint. Delightful piece to read.