His Everything

This may not be made for me. But, this is about a boy who pretty much looks perfect. But is he?

His eyes.... when I look at them, I'm paralized.

His smile... when I see it, if feel good inside.

His life... he has a good one.

His attitude... may not be the best.

Is he perfect?

He may look the part.

But he just can't be.

 

 

Don't judge a book by it's cover. Even if it looks like the best book ever.....

 

Reviews

[Lola]

i LOVE it ! good job

[Nicole]

Thank you very much for the nice reviews! Nicole is happy!

[Anna]

last line, soooo true!

I have a story to tell you. It's long, but I'll cliff note it.
It beings with:
I bought a book because it was pretty
It ends with:
I hated it.

[Wunderlich]

This is good. Short but strong. Well done.
One little tip: "paralyzed" has a "y", not an "i" :D

[Lori]

I like this because it seems to gently poke fun of the reader. You know what we're expecting, and you go in a different direction in the end.

[Closed Account]

no offense, nic, but i'm kinda confused. i mean i like it, but maybe i just get confused too easily, but i'm confused about this poem.