Southern Congregation

Southern Congregation

A Poem by E.j.aka.Hannah

An eye for an eye,

A tooth for a tooth,

Now we're all blind and bloody mouthed,

whats the point in revenge?

The choir dances,

come on guys, I wanna hear you sing the praise,

so crawl on your knees and clap your hands,

sing a song to the deaf and dumb,

your idiots and cowards, this is true,

Im sure God is really laughing at you.

 

© 2009 E.j.aka.Hannah


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well the loser below with the pigs can shut the f**k up. it was amazing this was probably my favorite!!! great job baby!!! :)))

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I doubt God is laughing. Interesting view on the likes. Like the poem. The last line needs an "am" or at least an apostrophe followed by an "m" after the word "I".

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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E.j.aka.Hannah
E.j.aka.Hannah

Chipley, FL



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Name:EJ Occupation: Artist & Wandering Soul Info: Im quiet, funny, independant, loyal, & honest. Nothing else is needed to be said. more..

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