Verbal Defecation

 

Watch the stars as they turn to nothing

Count my steps while they break across the hall

Terror grips your heart

I swear Ill kill you yet

.. ..

Every thud of every foot

You hear them echo in your head

Sweat dripping

You’re a f*****g coward, wallow in this disgrace

Head pounding

Im a God among your senses

And a lord among your lands

Don’t let your guard down

I may be lurking in your head

.. ..

When light shines down

The blood is visible in your sight

Let me tell you

My only friend

Your time hasn’t come yet

The pain you’ve caused to all those here

And suffering people far and near

Ill tell you once and not again

The knife in your chest will be your end

.. ..

Twist and growl

Bite and tear

Your clock strikes twelve

And your death draws near

Your blood is sweet like sugar

Your wound will rust and tear

Look in the ground, this is where youll end.

 

Reviews

[Silvario]

raw and enthralling. i really enjoyed this piece.

i love aggressive writing styles and this, to me at least, is writtin as such.

im not too much for poetic interpritation, but i did like how this piece flowed. you have talent indeed.

well done.