If only

Just a test to see how this website works

If only I lived right,
If only I satisfied,
If only I could get rid her,
If only I could stop loving her,
If only I could feel happiness,
If only I liked the human I am today,
If only I wanted more for myself,
If only I could change my thoughts,
If only she could change me,
If only I would let her in,
If only, a phrase muttered in deep sadness from someone who is not good enough,
If only I could talk to more people,
If only I would let people over,
If only I lived right.

Author's Note

I'm normally not to good at poetrypoetry and im sure this exception. This was kind of on the spot so don't go to harsh

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[Stars and Whales]

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[Cam]

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