grey sky

The trees lost their leaves  (grey sky)
The trees lost their leaves 

                                   they r staying brown naked 

grey sky fell on me 

                                      and hurt me in affect

like a prisoner in branches of trees

                                   i cant join race   

happy couple  skating

                                    on glassy surface

 the rivers are icy 

                                    slippery shining amazing                                                                                     

the moon came out

                                to see snow tracing

 i wrapped myself

                                 in warm coat and sounds      

i glance  in front of my face

                                to see my breath clouds

totally lost     i am unwilling to surrender

                                                                cold sets the time

 i submit to that cold   but i can go nowhere

                                    like a prisoner suspected of crime

I made my mind to stay calm and careful 

                                      It was  too dangerous  to walk around

                                                                                     one slip and u are  down

                                                                                                             if I can be more down

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