FOREVER YOURS

 

 

 

 

When did the moon come out in such splendour

Shining on my path of life?

When did the dawning of a new day

Creep up on a soul that was sound asleep?

When did the puzzle of my life fit into

The jigsaw of assorted memories?

Was it the day I met you?

Was it the first words you wrote on my heart?

Or. was it the love of the divine that allowed me

To find my beloved?

Gentle poet I am a prisoner of your poems…

A captive of your endearing words and

Willingly surrender to your love

Forever yours…

~~~

 

(c) Helena May 2009

Author's Note

Thank you for reading my words!

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

God Helena Dear ,that was so nice and lovely ,so romantic..
When the moon came out with all the splendor..Lighting my life
When the drawing of new day crept on my soul ,sound asleep
It was the day I met you..The first words you wrote onto my heart
Gentle poet ,I am prisoner to those words..Held captive
While I surrender to your love..
Oh what a lovely write..

[Unspoken poet]

this is awesome as well amazing, i enjoyed this

[BABSIE BEE]

This is wonderful. Full of love and passion for a soul mate, so obviously under a spell. Thanks for sharing. Going to my favs.
Babsie Bee xx

[Stacey Watts]

Very romantic heartfelt piece. You could feel the emotions come off the page. I loved this piece. Thank you for sharing it.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This was so beautifully penned!
The imagery was simply outstanding and the flow was also very appealing..
Great work :)

[M.S Solis]

wow
a touching poem that was beautifully written
was it the first words you wrote on my heart?
was my favorite line! keep it up!

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

What a warm and wonderful feeling I got from reading this lovely poem of yours, Helena! Love does give us such a sense of wonderment. :-) Sharon

[deeps]

This is just oh so beautiful and so romantic.
So touching as well. Beautifully expressed

[Tony]

Oh!! this is beautiful. We sometimes question what it is that caused that spark of love in our hearts and we are in awe as to what makes it such a good feeling. It becomes our every thought and act, a divine intervention.

Tony

[Akina]

really amazing written, the words are so great and wonderful.
good job.
thanks for sharing.

//Akina

[Nathan Noble]

this was seemed so incredibly honest and heart felt....amazing write.